許小布英文日記:
I like French fries and ice-cream cone from McDonalds,
and my cousin, Wen, likes them, too.
We’re always go to McDonalds.
I like drinking milk and black tea.
I like swimming in the natatorium.
The place I like the most is south in Taiwan.
because of south to have mountain and sea,then…fond of eating.
羅老師批文:
We’re always go to McDonalds. (BE VERB 後面要ING, BE VERB 通常是形容用的, 所以這個時候應該用GO 的動詞原形就好, 因為你是描述一個事實)
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We always go to McDonalds
I like drinking milk and black tea.I like swimming in the natatorium.
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文法上沒有問題但是你上文跟下文跳的太不自然
The place I like the most is south in Taiwan. (SOUTHERN TAIWAN—–台灣南部)
because of south to have mountain and sea,then…fond of eating. (because 要接子句, 所以你上一句不應該放句點, 應該直接接BECAUSE ; “台灣南部”不是人, 不能擁有, 所以不能用have要有there are(複數) )
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The place i like the most is in southern Taiwan because there are mountains, beaches, and delicious food.
你可以說OCEAN VIEW, 但是還是不能說那裡有SEA
SEA 通常是說內海
修改如下:
I like French fries and ice-cream cone from McDonalds,
and my cousin, Wen, likes them, too.
We always go to McDonalds.
My favorite beverages are milk and black tea, and I like swimming in natatorium in my spare time.
The place i like the most is in southern Taiwan because there are mountains, beaches, and delicious food.
Thank you!
Have a nice day,too
Just a matter of interest if you’d like to know… there’s an apostrophe for that fast food outlet, hence ‘McDonald’s’ rather than ‘McDonalds’. Have a nice day.
I don’t know your phone number.
Can you give me your phone number?
Good job….sweet baby! When you come again down to Kenting, give me a call…..3Q3Q!
ice cream cone 沒有錯哦, 這是名詞不是打錯動詞
通常是指玉米筒或者是餅乾筒裝的冰淇淋
>>>come….not cone…
ice-cream cone沒錯啊!蛋捲冰淇淋!
come….not cone…
like 跟come可以一起用嗎?我覺得這樣才對..哈
I like French fries and ice-cream from McDonalds,
and my cousin, Wen, likes them, too.
整理的真亂 =..=